Revise

As I had a great suggestion about my ending in class, I revised storyboard . So now the title show up in the reflected sky in water, not in the sky.
As I research music, I think that 30 sec is apropriate for commercial. Since I didn't find music yet, so it may change but it will be 30sec-45sec.
So the statement will be
Thesis statement: A 30-45 second commercial for a Japanese travel, introducing the traditional beauty of simplicity by the technique of modern animation.